2012中考英语书面表达专辑(昆明市)第1集

2012中考英语书面表达专辑(昆明市)第1集
1、、书面表达(原创)******
因为资源日益短缺、生态环境受到挑战的今天,发展低碳经济、倡导低碳生活、建设低碳城市正在成为国际上普遍认同的经济社会发展模式。假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Chris给你发邮件来,向你你校正在开展的低碳生活活动情况。请写回信。主题为行动改变世界。尽量少坐公车,步行,骑单车使用电子贺卡使用双面纸节约水,电.....Dear Chris,
  As you said in the e-mail that my school are launching the low carbon living activity now. And I__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
                                                                Yours,
                                                                Li Hua
萧山义蓬一中 高方英
参考范文******书面表达
Dear Chris,
     As you said in the e-mail that my school are launching the low carbon living activity now. And I am taking an active part in it. The theme of the activity is changing the world by actions. It suggests us go to school on foot or by bike instead of by bus and car. Besides, we should use e-greeting cards rather than the attritional cards. As to save the paper , it asks us to use both sides of every piece of paper. Of course, we should save water and electricity at the same time.
    Therefore, how do you think of the activity? I am looking forward to hearing from you again.
                                                            Yours,
                                                        Li Hua
评分原则:
各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(很好):(15分一13分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
信息全。②语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。 
第四档(好):(12分一10分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
有主要信息。②语言基本正确,有一些错误。 
第三档(还好):(9分一7分)基本完成试题规定的任务。
有主要信息。②语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。 
第二档(较差):(6分一4 分)未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
信息不全。②只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。 
第一档(差):(3分一l分)未能完成试题规定的任务。
不能表达有关信息。②只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。 
注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
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2、、书面表达请根据以下内容帮助Linda完成给她朋友的信,谈谈怎么陪妈妈度过即将到来的母亲节。
   母爱是世界上最伟大的;
   母亲节(Mother’s Day)—般在五月的第二个星期日;
   孩子们用各种方式让母亲感受到对她的爱,如:送鲜花、贺卡和礼物给母亲;帮助母亲做家务, 让母亲休息—天等;
   请再提出两个庆祝母亲节的建议。
   要求: 1)词数90左右。
          2) 短文必须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使文章连贯,通顺。
Dear Wendy
I’m very happy to hear from you. _______________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lots of love
Linda
书面表达评分标准:评分时先根据短文内容和语言表达,初步确定其所属档次,然后根据该档次的要求衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。本大题满分为15分,不设小数点以下分值。按五个档次给分。 
文中若出现真实的人名、校名,扣2分。需提出两个庆祝母亲节的建议。
一档	13-15分 	包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇, 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,具有较强的语言运用能力。 		二档	10-12分	基本包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,但有少量错误。		三档	7-9分 	内容包含了多数要点,语言表达过于简单,句子不够通顺,有部分语言错误,基本上不影响总体理解。		四档 	4-6分	只包含了少数要点,语言不规范,句子无条理,行文不连贯,语言错误严重,影响理解。		五档 	0-3分	只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语,语言错误多。		Helping with the farm work	1.ket parents relax
2.a poor family		Norma(Australia)	Taking a trip to the beach	1.have little homework
2.so much to do and see		Wang Kai(China)	…	1. …
2. …		
注意:
1.内容必须包括表格中的信息;
2.开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
3.词数:至少70词。开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about how children from different countries spend theirweekends.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Kai 
  (原创)
书面表达评分细则
按5个档次给分。中档属第三档(9分—7分)。
按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
总词数不足的在本题总分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(很好):(15—13分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
信息全。 2)语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。
第四档(好):(12—10分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
有主要信息。 2)语言基本正确,有一些错误。
第三档(还好):(9—7分)基本完成试题规定的任务。
有主要信息。 2)语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。
第二档(较差):(6—4)未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
信息不全。 2) 只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
第一档(差):(3—1分)未能完成试题规定的任务。
1)不能表达有关信息。2)只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
’s ideas	Your ideas		1.not old enough to solve the problem by yourselves	1. …		2.easier to make things worse	2. … 		3.share everything with teachers	3. …		
1.所写内容必须包括表格中老师的观点和你的至少三个观点;
2.开头已写好,不计入总词数;
3.词数:80个左右 
Recently we’re had a discussion with our teachers about whether we should make them know the quarrels between our classmates.
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评分标准
评分原则:个档次给分。—7分)。
按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
总词数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
本题有一定的开放性,所以只要言之有理,就应给分。
(一) 内容要点:   
    1.    2.(二)各档次的给分范围和要求:   
第档:(1~l 分)。    第四档:(1~1分)。第三档:(~7分)。第二档:(~分)第一档: (~分)。。
注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。 
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5、、书面表达******
假如你叫张蒙,班主任王老师想了解班级同学的状况,以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求,给班主任王老师写封e-mail,说明自己的情况,并请她给你提一些建议。
内容要求:
1、学习任务重,睡眠不足,缺少体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。
2、在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。
(参考词汇:have a lot of homework to do , not have enough time to sleep, do sports,talk/communicate, be not allowed to ,surf the Intenet, listen to music)
注意:
1、字数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。
2、开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。
From: zhangmeng@163.com  To:chlw524@sina.com   Subject:problems  Date:March 23
Dear  Ms. Zhang,
     I’m very glad to write to you.                                        
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                Best wishes,
                                                                Zhang Meng
参考范文
Ⅹ.书面表达(15分)
From: zhangmeng@163.com  To:chlw524@sina.com   Subject:problems  Date:March 23
Dear  Ms. Zhang,
     I’m very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days . Every day I have a lot of homework to do at school. I don’t have enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk or play together.
    When I get back home from school, I’m not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favorite music. I feel worried about them. I don’t know what I should do. Could you please give me some suggestions?
                                                                   Best wishes,
                                                                   Zhang Meng
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6、书面总结是有效学习的重要组成部分,每个同学都应重视和培养这方面的能力。今天的英语考试已经接近尾声了,经过近两个小时的答题体验,请总结一下自己在英语学习中中取得的进步和存在的不足,并对今后的英语学习拟定一些计划。下面的提示句可以帮助你更好地完成写作。
要求1、紧扣主题,观点正确,行文连贯、流畅。2、提示句需在文中出现。3、字数80— 100左右。
I have just had a very… time in this English examination. I found I have made great progress in… But there is still… to learn further. In the future, I will try my best in…
参考范文******
One possible version:
  I have just had a very wonderful time in this English examination. I'm happy that I have done it well. I can finish it without effort. Because my English often gives me a hand, he teaches me how to study. Many students also help me with my homework. If I have problems with it, my classmates are willing to help me.  I found I have made great progress in English. But there is still a lot to learn future. Sometimes I can't pronounce the word correctly. So I will communicate with my students, friends, parents. In the future, I will try my best in it. I believe my English will be better and better.
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7、、书面表达******
你校与英国某中学结成姊妹学校,英方校刊Ann)来信了解你校的课外活动情况及你们的建议,请你根据下面提供的内容用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
生词:兴趣小组 interest group   活动 activity
         活动时间:4:50 – 5:50
         主要内容:(1)体育类:篮球、足球;
                  (2)兴趣小组活动: 绘画 歌舞 电脑等;
                  (3)英语角 (周三下午)。
             建议:(1)增加课外活动时间;
                  (2)减少作业量。 Dear Ann,
 I’ like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually _______ 
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
   (参考答案:
I’ like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually have activities from 4:50—5:50 in the afternoon. We have different kinds of activities. Some students are interested in sports. They play basketball and football. We also have some special interest groups, such as drawing, singing and dancing. And now, We computer games are the most popular. On Wednesday afternoon we go to English Corner. We like speaking English there. We hope to spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.)  
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8、、书面表达******
下面是Sarah给Sue的e-mail, 请你仔细阅读原文, 然后根据你的情况,以Sue为名给Sarah发一封e-mail. 字数在80个词左右。 
请注意:1. 不得写出自己或学校的真实名称;2. 不得照抄原文。
(参考答案Dear Sarah,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m glad you are enjoying your holiday. Now let me tell you something about my holiday. I didn’t do well in my maths exam, so the most important thing for me in the holiday is that I must spend most of the time on it. I’ll do some more exercises. When I have time, I’ll visit some friends. Also I’ll help my parents with their farm work. After the farm work we will make a trip to Yellow Mountains. I believe we’ll enjoy it. 
I hope you can come to see me sometime in the holiday.
Sue)
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Dear Sue,
How are you? Summer holiday began last week. My brother and I are having our holiday. During the holiday we are planning to learn swimming, climb the mountains and do many other things. Yesterday we went to the museum with my parents. On the way home, we went shopping. My mother bought me a beautiful skirt and a new recorder for my English study. We are sure we’ll have a very good time.
How about you, my dear friend? Have you made any plans for your summer holiday? Please write me soon.
Sarah
Dear Sarah,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m glad you are enjoying your holiday. Now let me tell you something about my holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sue 

2012中考英语书面表达专辑(昆明市)第1集1、、书面表达(原创..2012中考英语书面表达专辑(昆明市)第1集1、、书面表达(原创)******因为资源日益短缺、生态环境受到挑战的今天,发展低碳经济、倡导低碳生活、建设低碳城市正在成为国际上普遍认同的经济社会发展模式。假如你是李华,你的美国朋友chris给你发邮件来,向你你校正在开展的低碳生活活动情况。请写回信。主题为行动改变世界。尽量少坐公车,步行,骑单车使用电子贺卡使用双面纸节约水,

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