2012中考英语书面表达专辑01(广安五月冲刺)

2012中考英语书面表达专辑01(广安五月冲刺)
       
   1、、书面表达【原创】******
 假定你是李斌,最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论,你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况,请你用英语写封回信,简单地介绍以下讨论结果:
1.节水节电;
2.垃圾分类;
3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕;
4.步行,骑自行车或乘坐公交车。
参考词汇:低碳low carbon  纸巾tissue
注意:词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数);可适当增加细节了,以使行文连贯;开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
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Best wishes,
Li Bing
参考答案******
书面表达。
各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(很好): (15分-13分)  完全完成试题规定的任务。
 ① 信息全。② 语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。
第四档(好): (12分-10分)  完全完成试题规定的任务。
 ① 有主要信息。② 语言基本正确,有一些错误。
第三档 (还好):(9分-7分)基本完成试题规定的任务。
① 有主要信息。 ② 语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。
第二档(较差):(6分-4分) 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
① 信息不全。 ② 只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
第一档 (差): (3分-1分)未能完成试题规定的任务。
 ① 不能表达有关信息。 ② 只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
 注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其它内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。    
    参考范文:
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of  low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. ln addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
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2、、书面表达(原创)******
    一家英文杂志社正在调查中考后学生不同的放松方式。假如你是陈林,请结合表格中的信息并结合自身的看法,给杂志社写一封信。
Names	Ways	Reasons		Lihong	go on vacation	1.dream of it for a long time
2.relaxing		Zhenming	read more books	1. favorite hobby
2. get more knowledge		Chenlin	…..	1…..
2……		注意:1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息;
      2. 开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
      3. 词数:70个左右。开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about how different middle school students relax themselves in the coming summer vacation after high school entrance examination._________________________-
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Chen Len
参考答案******
书面表达I’m writing to tell you about how different middle school students relax themselves in the coming summer vacation after high school entrance examination._Lihong would like to go on a vacation. Because she has dreamed of it for a long time and it is really relaxing. She believes that she will have a good time during the coming summer vacation. As for Zhenming, he will just stay at home and read more books. Reading is his favorite hobby and he wants to get more knowledge. I’m Chenlin. I hope I can play with my best friends. As we all know, we pay more attention to our study so that we don’t have more time to spend with our friends. Besides, we may go to different high schools. So we can remember each other forever.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Chen Len
评分标准******评分原则:
按5个档次给分。中档属于第三档(9分---7分)。
按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
总词数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
本题有一定的开放性,所以只要言之有理,就应给分。
内容要点:
  1.存在的环境问题方面;
3.,采取怎样的措施,举例—3方面①问题和措施的信息全。②语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。
   第四档 (好):(12分-10分)完全完成试题规定的任务。
       ①有主要信息。②语言基本正确,有一些错误。
   第三档 (还好): (9分-7分)基本完成试题规定的任务。
       ①有主要信息。②语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚达意。
   第二档 (较差): (6分-4分) 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
        ①信息不全。②只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
   第一档 (差): (3分-1分) 未能完成试题规定的任务。
        ①不能表达有关信息。②只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
注意: 凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分.
3、、书面表达******
近年来,家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化……, 你一定会为家乡的日新月异倍感自豪,同时为目前的状况深感忧虑,请你为家乡的建设及环境的改善献计献策,好吗?请根据表格内的提示,写一篇题为 I love my hometown 的短文,字数:90字左右。
自豪	马路宽敞(wide),工厂林立;
交通便捷,火车站已投入使用8年;		忧虑	建房、修路,农田越来越少;
污染严重,鱼大量死亡;		建议	认识保护环境的重要性;
呼吁人们不要再毁坏农田;
…(至少再提一条建议)		Over the years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
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参考范文******
书面表达
文章仅供参考,表达正确都给分:
      Over the years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.The roads are wider and  there are many more factories than before. It’s easy for people to travel to and from town. A railway station has been in service for eight years. I’m proud of that. At the same time, I am worried that there is less and less farmland because people are destroying farmland to build houses and roads. The pollution is so serious that a lot of fish have died. I suggest that people should realize the importance of protecting the environment. They shouldn’t destroy farmland any more. We should also stop the factories from polluting the rivers. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful.
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4、、书面表达
    假如你是刘磊,你生活在农村,你的笔友Peter将随团来你家做客一天,请你将以下安排发邮件告知。
    
上午活动安排	meet my parents
go fishing by the river near our village with me
harvest(收到)vegetables with me		下午活动安排	…		注意:1.内容必须包括上午的安排和下午的安排;
      2.开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
      3.词数:70个左右。开头和结尾部分内容不计入总词数。
    Dear Peter,
I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit.
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I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Liu Lei
参考范文******
书面表达
Hi Peter,
I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit. In the morning,you will meet my parents first,and then go fishing with me by the river near our village.After that,you will harvest vegetables with me.The vegetables are all fresh and healthy.My mother will cook delicious lunch.
In the afternoon,you can watch birds with me.There are many different kinds of birds near our house. Finally,you will learn how to feed chickens,we feed them three times a day.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Liu Lei
书面表达评分标准
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5、、书面表达****** 
     航标杂志社正在做关于家庭成员中最喜欢的节日的调查。假如你是Alice ,请根据表中的信息并结合自己的看法,给杂志社写一封信。(改编)
Family   members	Favourite festival	Reasons		Father	National Day	1. a seven-dayholiday
2. favourite season		Mother	Mid-Autumn Day	1. likes moon cakes
2. family party		Alice		1.
2.		注意:
1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息;
2. 开头已经为你写好,你只需要接着写;
3. 词数:70个词左右。 开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词数。
英语试卷  第8页
Dear editor,
     
     I am writing to tell you about what festival my family members like.                  
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                           
                                                                                            
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                            
	
Looking forward to your reply.
      Yours,
       Alice
参考范文******书面表达
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about what festival my family members like. My father’s
favourite festival is National Day because he can have a seven-day holiday and
Autumn is his favourite season. My mother likes Mid-Autumn Day best because she likes 
moon cakes and she likes having a big family party. My favourite festival is Christmas 
Day. On Christmas Day, I can get some Christmas gifts and know more about Christmas.
That can help me learn English better.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Alice 
(一)评分原则:
1.按5 个档次给分。中档属第三档(9分—7 分)。
2.按学生所写内容和用语言确定档次(内容分和语言分各占一半)。
3.总词数不足40个在本题总得分扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分。
(二)各档次的给分范围及要求:
1.很好:(15分—13分)信息全;语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,少量错误。
2.好: (12分—10分)有主要信息;语言基本正确,有一些错误。
3.还好:(9分—7分)有主要信息;语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。
4.较差:(6分—4分)信息不全;只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。
5.差: (3分—1分)不能表达有关信息;只有几个有关单词,语言错误很多,不能达意。
注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其它内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
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2012中考英语书面表达专辑01(广安五月冲刺) ..2012中考英语书面表达专辑01(广安五月冲刺) 1、、书面表达【原创】****** 假定你是李斌,最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论,你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况,请你用英语写封回信,简单地介绍以下讨论结果:1.节水节电;2.垃圾分类;3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕;4.步行,骑自行车或乘坐公交车。参考词汇:低碳low carbon 纸

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